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PostSubject: Clothes Over Bro's: Stick Up! [A BLPNHJ fanfic]   Sun Mar 23, 2008 8:27 am

Summary: It's peytons birthday and there having a party at Clothes Over Bro's. The shop gets robbed half way through the party and Peyton runs to get brooke. Brooke and lucas were kissing. Things happen that lead to lucas in fatal trouble, and Brooke feels betrayed and hurt when peyton refuses to help him! The story WILL end explosively! Woo! Lol

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PostSubject: Re: Clothes Over Bro's: Stick Up! [A BLPNHJ fanfic]   Sun Mar 23, 2008 8:32 am

ooh, that sounds great! can't wait to read the story Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Clothes Over Bro's: Stick Up! [A BLPNHJ fanfic]   Sun Mar 23, 2008 8:41 am

haha, I read the whole story at OTHforums already! Great job! and what's your username there? lol.
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PostSubject: Re: Clothes Over Bro's: Stick Up! [A BLPNHJ fanfic]   Sun Mar 23, 2008 8:52 am

my user names the same at OTHForums lol
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PostSubject: Re: Clothes Over Bro's: Stick Up! [A BLPNHJ fanfic]   Sun Mar 23, 2008 8:52 am

Ohh, haha. sorry, my bad. I'm really blur. haha.
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PostSubject: Re: Clothes Over Bro's: Stick Up! [A BLPNHJ fanfic]   Sun Mar 23, 2008 9:02 am

lol its ok Smile
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PostSubject: Chapter One   Sun Mar 23, 2008 9:03 am

Chapter One

Brooke burst out laughing.
“I remember that!” she giggled, though gritted teeth, trying not to burst into laughter again. Peyton smiled, and sipped at her champagne. She was desperate to find out what her birthday surprise was, but Brooke wasn’t spilling anything! She decided to change tactics.
“This is the best birthday ever!” she sighed, smiling at the gang in front of her.

Nathan was sitting on a metal stool, with Hayley on his knee. Jamie was playing on the floor with a racing car he had brought along. Brooke was sitting on the Clothes Over Bro’s counter, and Lucas had his arm wrapped around Peyton’s waist. They were all dressed extravagantly. Lucas and Nathan were in matching suits, which was a rare site. Peyton didn’t dare ask, but she was sure they hadnt organised; just a… coincidence! She grinned at the thought. Hayley was wearing a dress similar to the one she had worn at there first prom. Brooke was wearing jeans, a red top and a black jumper, but even in this casual outfit, she still looked amazingly attractive.
“Remember when we crashed that prom after we got Mouth out from prison?” she laughed, forgetting to keep on about her birthday surprise.
“Yeah!” Brooke laughed again, her champagne swirling in her glass. Peyton smiled as everyone else laughed. It was wonderful what Brooke had done; the Clothes Over Bro’s shop had been moved around, and in the centre they were having a party to celebrate Peyton’s birthday, but if she was honest, all she wanted to do was snuggle up with Lucas. She squeezed Lucas’s hand and he tightened around her waist.
“What time is it?” Brooke asked.
“Quarter to six, why?” Hayley said, looking up from her watch.
“Time for Peyton’s birthday surprise!” Brooke said, looking more excited than Peyton was.
“Yes!” Peyton yelled before she knew what she was doing.
“You’ve been counting the minutes, havent you?” Hayley laughed.
“Who wouldn’t?” Nathan smiled.
“I hope you get a mini race car,” Jamie piped up, “I got this one at the week-end! We could play together!” Brooke ran into the room and dragged a clothes hanger behind her.
“This, P Sawyer, is your new wardrobe!” she squealed. Peyton jumped up and raked through the clothes. There was jeans and tops and dresses and skirts.
“I havent seen these in your shop before!” Peyton said, confused.
“There the new collection, they wont come out till next year,” Brooke grinned. Peyton grabbed Brooke and hugged her tightly.
“Thank you, so much!” she gasped.
“Its ok,” Brooke said.

They drank more champagne and Peyton tried on all the clothes. Nathan whispered into his sons ear and Jamie jumped up.
“Peyton! I got your present, its in the car!” Jamie growled and frowned at Nathan.
“Sorry! I forgot!” Nathan grinned. They left the shop and walked left towards the car.
“How far you parked?” Payton asked, anxious as to what a four year old might have gotten her, “Should I change into my old clothes, or is it clean?” Hayley laughed and shook her head.
“Oh, Lucas, Can I speak to you round the back?” Brook asked.
“Yeah, sure!” Lucas replied and got up. He followed her around the counter and into the back room. The door shut with a thud. Jamie and Nathan arrived a few minutes later, and Jamie had a large box in his hands. It was covered in red and yellow spotted paper.
“There you go, Peyton!” he grinned.
“Thank you!” She said, and took the box from his outstretched hands. She dug her nails under the flaps and ripped the paper. There was a crash and they all looked towards the front door. Two men stood in the door way. Both men wore balaclavas and black suits. One guy… had a gun.
“Give us all your money, Brooke Davis!”
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PostSubject: Re: Clothes Over Bro's: Stick Up! [A BLPNHJ fanfic]   Sun Mar 23, 2008 10:21 am

0h noo...Poor Brooke. What will she do? UD sooon pleaseeeee
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PostSubject: Chapter Two   Mon Mar 24, 2008 10:55 am

Chapter Two

Brooke walked into the back room and shut the door behind Lucas.
“What’s up?” he asked, a twinkle in his eye. Brooke had a mental orgasm as he smiled.
“I… still… I want…” she stuttered, completely losing her cool. Suddenly, he grabbed her shoulders and kissed her passionately on the lips.
“Me too,” he whispered in her ear. The light stubble on his chin and cheeks rubbed against Brooks face. Her eyes fluttered lightly. She pulled back a little and kissed him back. She grabbed every part of him she could, and he pulled her tightly to his chest. She breathed heavily as he kissed her neck. They took it in turns to make love to each others face (they couldn’t exactly do it properly with a four year old in the front room!).
“What about Peyton?” Brooke breathed.
“I… I don’t know, but I’ll finish with her. I love you!” he breathed. They started kissing again and Lucas slid his hand down the back of Brooke’s jeans, squeezing her bum lightly.
“What the f*ck!” Peyton gasped from the door. Lucas pulled away from Brooke and stared at Peyton.
“You can explain later,” Peyton growled, and slammed a balled fist into Lucas’s crotch. Lucas squealed in a pitch too high for normal people to reach.
“There’s a guy outside with… with a gun!” Peyton said, fear running back into her face.
“What?” Brooke gasped.
“Yeah, and Hayley and Nathan are trying to persuade them to let them and Jamie go but I thought I should come and get you!” Peyton gasped. Brooke ran out to the back of the counter and gasped. Nathan and Hayley were crying in a corner, holding Jamie down under them.
“What the hell?” Brooke growled, she pressed a panic button from under the counter and pulled out a baseball bat, “You made a big mistake trying to steal from Clothes Over Bro’s!”
“Just give us the money!” the man growled, “Just give us the money, Brooke, and we wont shoot Peyton!”
“What the f*ck?” Brooke said, utterly confused.
“Aaargh!” Peyton screamed as the second, hidden, robber grabbed her from behind. Hidden Robber placed a gun to Peyton’s head.
“Now, give us the cash!” Robbie One yelled.
“Don’t waste your breath!” Peyton sighed, “If you wanna shoot someone that Brooke cares about, shoot Lucas!”
“What?” Nathan and Hayley gasped.
“Well, he was the one she was fucking in the cupboard,” Peyton growled. Nathan and Hayley gasped.
“Ooh! Adult stuff!” Brooke heard Jamie gasp.
“That is an extreme exaggeration!” Brooke gasped.
“Is that why his hand was down your arse?” Peyton growled.
“’Scuse me, but im trying to rob your shop!” Robber One yelled, with not a hint of humour.
“An I’m trying to tell you how to do it right!” Peyton yelled back. Suddenly, Nathan jumped up and pushed Robber One to the ground. Hidden Robber pushed Peyton to the floor and lifted his gun up.
“No!” Hayley yelled, and jumped into the air. Hidden Robber pulled the rigger before he realised what was happening. The bullet cracked out of the barrel and ripped through the air. It lodged itself into Hayley’s arm. She fell to the ground screaming.
“No!” Peyton yelled, “Hayley!” Peyton scrambled across the floor to Hayley, who was panting on the floor.
“Jesus, how did you cope back in high school,” Hayley joked through gritted teeth. Peyton grabbed the nearest t-shirt from a rack and wrapped it tightly around her arm. Nathan started punching Robber One’s face again and again. Hayley reached out and grabbed Nathans t-shirt.
“Don’t Nathan!” she cried, “Remember last time!” He pulled away. Robber One got up and Nathan held him against the wall.
“Let him go!” Hidden Robber yelled.
“No! You let go of the gun!” Brooke screeched, trying to act dramatic. She held the baseball bat above her head, ready to hit him at a moment’s notice. Hidden Robber placed the gun on the counter… and grabbed the baseball bat. Brooke pulled it towards her, and Hidden Robber pushed it into her chest. It squashed her breasts, and she gasped in pain.
“You little fucking wanker dick shit-head!” she yelled, and lifted her knee into the crotch area of Hidden Robber. He crumpled to the floor.
“Like I said, you picked the wrong shop to rob!” she growled. Brooke picked up the gun and threw it to the ground. It didn’t shatter, or break, or even chip, like she had planned.
“Damn it!” she growled, then Hidden Robber threw her to the ground. He grabbed her hair, and elbowed her boobs. He nipped and bit.
“Wanna play bitchy, do you?” he growled. Brooke lifted her head to spit in his face, but at the same time Peyton kicked Hidden Robber in the back. Peyton fell to floor after losing her balance, and Hidden Robber flew forward, his heading connecting with Brookes. Her head flew backwards slamming into the floor. Her eyes rolled back as she lost consciousness.

Brooke woke and found herself tied up. Hayley was lying on the floor where she had been earlier. Peyton was beside Brooke, and Nathan and Jamie were tied to a chair, Jamie sitting on Nathans knee, frowning at the two robbers who were trying to get into the safe under the counter.
“Got it!” Hidden Robber yelled. Robber One walked away while Hidden Robber filled a back pack up with Brookes money. Robber One pulled out a tankard of petrol from his back pack. It wasn’t very large but it had a nozzle on the top, allowing only a tiny spray out at one time. He covered the floor and the counter. He sprayed some of the clothes with petrol, before heading out back.
“No! Please don’t burn this place!” Brooke screamed. Police sirens could be heard outside, and within seconds, police cars were skidding to a halt outside.
“Took there time!” Brooke growled. Robber One came back into the shop front and gasped.
“Shit! What are we gonna do?” Robber One yelled.
“It’s ok, there’s a back door!” Hidden Robber yelled. Brooke held in a laugh. The back door led to a back alley that had been bricked up several years earlier. Robber One grinned and pulled out a lighter.
“Get out to the back!” he yelled to Hidden Robber. Hidden Robber disappeared and ran through the door.
“Now, who wants to burn first?”
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PostSubject: Re: Clothes Over Bro's: Stick Up! [A BLPNHJ fanfic]   Mon Mar 24, 2008 10:59 am

Amazing chapter! Can't wait to read more! UD sooon...xD
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